New song I wrote... thoughts?

Thoughts????

You called me at night
And said that you missed me.
Too bad you’re drunk,
Or at least acting like it.

You’re growing up too fast,
You’re drinking them cheap shots,
Smoking it expensive
Having nights full of fun

Too bad you don’t know
How it’s not me
Sometimes I hope
You’d realize how

Hard that it is,
How fast that it is
How new that it is
To me, Cause I’m

Walking on thin ice
Releasing all the vice
Dreaming of a time
When it’ll be alright

Cause I’m walking on thin ice
Releasing all the vice
Dreaming of a time
When it’ll be alright

One day all the pain,
Was released all away
When it happens to you,
Give me a clue
For I’d like to know, how it feels

So where do we stand?
Girls, drinks and smokes
But it’s gonna be ok,
Cause we’re all gonna be toast

When they find out,
Where we’ve been the most
Cause I wish you could see How…. (chorus)